Revision begins

I started mentally revising the Holmes story on my drive home, so I think I'm ready to look at it again. I kicked the tires of the Tarot story a bit last night, then went off and did something non-writing instead. Tarot story not lighting my fires just now.

I think I will reach draft 1.5 of the Holmes story, then let somebody else read it and react. Probably my PNBR.