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Okie dokie, director's commentary time. Pick a story and I'll pull it apart and tell you what I was trying to do and how, which sentences make me writhe with regret, and what I learned from writing it. These are the stories I've already done commentaries for. Pick something other than one of those. Pick a recent story! Sortable list here. Well, actually, pick what you're interested in having analyzed. It's all good.

Music: Today's track performed live. This is post-rock, not shoegaze, but the genres are related and you can sure see why in that vid. Love that track. The influences of Explosions in the Sky are quite evident. All tracks available on Bandcamp.

ETA: I've got four stories to write commentary on, and that's enough for now! I have the first one in progress.
  • Current Music: The Distance Between Us : Codes In the Clouds : Paper Canyon
Ooh! Ooh! I would love to see you talk about Gunpowder Tea, which remains one of my very favorites of yours.
Oooh, Wesley. And that one is more writerly than many of them, so it'll be fun to pick apart. Here, have my very-inappropriate-for-that-story Wesley icon!
You don't know me, and I never comment(And one day I will, I promise), but still, I'd love to see commentary on Thusia or pre-series fics from that verse.
Mmm, Thusia, maybe my own personal favorite of them all! Would be happy to write commentary on that.
I find your list of stories intimidating. I already forget. Have you done one for Emergence? That's one I'd like to see.
"Emergence". First fanfic story ever finished. (Well, some short things finished first.) I'll start with this one because it should make me wince a lot and talk a lot about things I've learned since.