Watson likely stories

Damn damn damn damn damn.

Sent the story draft to Mr Pedia's Story Clinic, and he said to me, "You know what's wrong with it. There isn't enough conflict. Everything goes in straight lines. People need to be wrong more than they are."

Damn damn damn damn damn.

I know what I have to do, but it's so much work. Whinge, whinge.

Send a lot of coffee, please.
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He's scarily good at analyzing fiction. Best line editor I've ever worked with, too, when I can get him to pay attention long enough to line edit. I can't give him anything but very-near final drafts for that task, though, because he'll get distracted by pointing out structural problems.

Brain the size of a planet, really.